16-02-2024 06:56 AM - edited 16-02-2024 06:58 AM
16-02-2024 06:56 AM - edited 16-02-2024 06:58 AM
@tonys for you tonys. a beautiful song for a beautiful man https://youtu.be/T1m7QpQq-4c?si=Wzur4djHGt_l0qmJ
16-02-2024 10:32 AM
16-02-2024 10:32 AM
Thanks for another beautiful poem Mr Wordman! I really enjoyed this one. Good ole Pea for giving you the inspiration.
16-02-2024 02:02 PM
16-02-2024 02:02 PM
Thanks for another beautiful poem @tonys 😎
16-02-2024 04:18 PM - edited 16-02-2024 04:25 PM
16-02-2024 04:18 PM - edited 16-02-2024 04:25 PM
Hello @Acanthiza . I always worried that this thread would wither on the vine like so many other
creative writing threads I come across. @Jynx 's room in Hotel Sane.. Still a glow through the old blinds. Thanks to those who keep it living.. I liked the stream of thought in
your words. Got me thinking. . . was the entity that made us, a god with mental health issues.
The excised issues of all the gods, stitched together. Perhaps they saw the sadness in perfection. .
Plastic Hollywood heavens, perfect skies, mourning the absence of good old fashioned, bad weather.
Anyway... your breeze made my windmills turn. thankyou.
@MermaidHair I love the little gem in your post about unhappy child and poetry. So much truth in that. We don't waste tears, do we. Save em till we have enough for a little brook and then somehow we have to make it flow..n glow.
Thanks to everyone for your kind words. Too many to list. Poets are like Pidgeon's. Few
breadcrumbs and thoughtful feet, keeps us happy. How are you @Emelia8. Is your little pooch all fluffy, dry, n safe now.
I've had some stern words with the weather man about that. LoL
Hi @greenpea . Your song was definitely me. thanks mate. Hi @Oaktree @Shaz51 @ENKELI And anyone
else who waters there pony here, have a beautiful day tonys..
🙂
16-02-2024 04:51 PM
16-02-2024 04:51 PM
Ha ha @tonys 😂♥ yes thank you, my Hannah is currently dry, fluffy, and safe. Hoping the rain and storms from the past few days wrap up by tomorrow, so puppy classes can go ahead 🐶 this week.
Hope you are beginning to feel better 🌷🌻🌹
17-02-2024 06:51 PM
17-02-2024 06:51 PM
keep writing @tonys
i read your beautiful poem about the pearls - it's all in the details - taking you right there and making you wander abou t t he person observing her as much as her - beauty is in the eye of the beholder 🙂
wow today was a day for me, i notice how things change instantly, the world is miraculous.
18-02-2024 12:17 PM
18-02-2024 12:17 PM
@tonys Lovely to read this thread invigorated by your courage and wit and sensitivity.
Hope all is good… up the top paddock!
I been busy and devices giving me the pip. Packing in and locking me out and all that.
Good thing is I have been busy and getting back into life. Not on a device. Hallelujah
19-02-2024 11:36 AM
19-02-2024 11:36 AM
Thanks all who have posted their works! I've not finished reading through the thread, but @KirSa_EnigmA I just had to say your poem Grabbed me. Love it.
19-02-2024 12:10 PM
19-02-2024 12:10 PM
Hey @tonys @Jynx @Appleblossom @EternalFlower @Emelia8 and everyone. Finally read through this thread! Great stuff
Thought I might throw in something I wrote a couple of weeks back for my group facilitator when she left for new challenges...
E
Our guide in the darkness
A beacon of hope
One so sensitive
Sworn to help us cope
This sure symbiosis
Between student and sage
Mindful companions
Far beyond the page
Each week is a lesson
In how to succeed
A step-by-step journey
To turn thought into deed
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Even now as she departs
There is much left to impart
But this end is just a start
And nothing can steal her from our hearts
StuF
PS The title "E" is the first initial of her first name. The original poem has her full first name, but thought it best to be completely anonymous
19-02-2024 12:18 PM
19-02-2024 12:18 PM
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