15-02-2024 11:39 AM
15-02-2024 11:39 AM
Wonderful yo hear from you, I was starting to worry. Thanks for the poem it was awesome. Take care and I hope that you feel better soon
15-02-2024 04:44 PM
15-02-2024 04:44 PM
Also @tonys just read your poem. An absolutely exquisite journey of words. Really powerful imagery, you're incredibly talented! Thank you for sharing 😍💜
15-02-2024 04:53 PM
15-02-2024 04:53 PM
15-02-2024 06:35 PM
15-02-2024 06:35 PM
Hi there lovely clever @tonys 😊💝 Thanks for tagging me into your beautifully written Valentines Day poem. 👍 It really is very very good.
Sorry to hear you are still suffering the effects of COVID. Lets hope it releases its clutches from you soon. ♥
15-02-2024 07:32 PM - edited 15-02-2024 07:35 PM
15-02-2024 07:32 PM - edited 15-02-2024 07:35 PM
To gaze into the eye of the horse is to be granted a glimpse of a tempest that barely tolerates us
@greenpea . A special moment. Your dream means something important. I'll bet Smiling gecko or someone knows what dreams mean. I surely don't, but I am glad that much of me is stuck in one.
Thankyou greenpea. I'm so lucky to have you as a friend. Hope you and your "kidults" are as happy as the times will allow. I pinched your word and use it every chance I get.
Played this once but people gave up on it before they got to the words in the song..! Its my go too
Autumn mood song. One day please let me know how the diet is going. Take care friend.
https://youtu.be/Pc3OnSQc48s?si=pq1yq5fmW0UDQ7Uo..
Thankyou for your beautiful words of suport @Jynx @Emelia8 @Oaktree and all the kind souls on Sane . Hope the love you give find a home back in you. tonys..
15-02-2024 07:48 PM
15-02-2024 07:48 PM
@tonys you are a good friend to pea i care for you alot. when you say you are stuck in a dream me too. i believe our existence is a dream particular to this universe that we live in. i believe there are multiverses. this is just one we inhabit. Im a spiritual person not religious. i have started up with my weight loss routine again as i slacked off for awhile. my health is so bad at the moment i cannot kid myself anymore now no more fattening foods. The song is beautiful, soft and gentle thank you for posting it.
15-02-2024 07:56 PM
15-02-2024 07:56 PM
Thankyou @ENKELI .. Think your prayers are helping my friend. If even half my prayers for raindrops
for my friends far west are heard, I fear I may have prayed you a deluge. I know only some of the challenges you are facing but good people always find a way through. Your better than good. The oasis of winter will soon be here, That will be our time to recoup, regroup, and take back lost ground.
Take care Enkeli.. tonys.
15-02-2024 08:46 PM
15-02-2024 08:46 PM
@ENKELI It’s still Thursday!
This is what happens when I wake up at 3:30am.
My mind slid into Friday and Friday hasn’t arrived yet.
G
15-02-2024 09:24 PM
15-02-2024 09:24 PM
A poetry thread! I just posted my poem in my rambling thread 😅
I've enjoyed skimming through and reading people's poems, thanks for being brave and posting them. I hope I can write again sometime soon 😿
I have another old poem though, here goes...
A Creation
The seams are near invisible
so the whole seems indivisible
an unnatural creation
bearing the form of man
the stitching is immaculate
but repetition cannot inculcate
the promise of normality
from a surgeons steady hands
it’s a blind old sinners trap
to hide the mind’s unholy zap
and survive a while by sophistry
to avoid the fiery brand
But eventually the truth will speak
betray the cause of sallow cheeks
and sunken eyes grown tired
old before their time
The faded form a cause of guilt
the physic takes on psychic wilt
serve penance and feel agony
for no deserv-ed crime
The body’s good, the brain is bad
the tale’s too common to be sad
can but bask in winter’s sun
before returning to the brine
16-02-2024 01:13 AM - edited 16-02-2024 01:32 AM
16-02-2024 01:13 AM - edited 16-02-2024 01:32 AM
Multiverse you say @greenpea . Tantalizing concepts you raise my friend.. We are on the cusp of an AI genesis. People
living, loving cruise ship virtual holidays in the safety of a helmet. Our senses convinced its real.
In centuries to come, will the first self aware children be born in that world. It happens now, without
quantum computers each night in the universe of dreams. Are we already the children of our computor generated forefathers. Definatley fertile fields for poetry Greenpea..
Love is such a driving force in collision with an ever more lonely world.
Do minds conjure up scraps for love lonely people to delude them that one more day is worth it, in the search for love. . .
LADY IN PEARLS...
I always did wonder about the lady in pearls
Does she sleep on soft pillows of cloud.
Is the comfort imagined meandering mind
dishevelled drunk mutters aloud.
Rain drops of milk on her meadows of silk
caressing untouchable skin.
Dizzy room dance as we twirl in a trance
Free falling our dances within.
I always did ponder why sweethearts grow fonder
the bottle surrenders to sips.
Did kisses grow sweeter
As we pay by the meter
Nirvana in peach parted lips..
Did I imagine my hands on her hips
Waking hair raking with warm finger tips.
Forbidden hands grasping on mutiny ships.
Or a lie
that I justify
paid for in tips..
Second hand shoppers playing taming of shrews.
Fed to the lions for differing views.
The eye of the oyster first covets the pearls
Abandoned old dolls become dancing show girls..
Disturbed you may be at pearls imposition
Holding her close in a foetal position.
Licked lead paint armpits institutional hell
Adonis of anger holds keys to my cell.
Was lady in pearls
just me in my head.
Better than truth
in a love lonely bed.
But ask your self why
my cold cell as you lock it. 16.2.24
When greeted each morn
Three more pearls in my pocket..
For Greenpea. from tonys mb 1 You gave me the idea mate.
and we thank the world for showing us love in all its wonderful colours. dreams or real.
@Jynx @Glisten @Emelia8 @Acanthiza @ENKELI @SmilingGecko @TAB n @StuF
@Shaz51 @Historylover @Tilz @Appleblossom @EternalFlower @Meowmy n @Former-Member @Oaktree
and all the beaut sane people sharing ideas and words.
Having a spell in the top paddock. no more poems for a bit. I promise. LoL 🙂
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